A Scenic View
“poverty lines these roads linton scappoose rainier st helens where the burned out burger barns edge out the sky where sunburnt r-vees deliquesce over dirt roads where the weight of empty pockets is gangrenous to desiccated thoughts and prayers and shadows of shackles obfuscate light where sheds barely resemble houses resembling sheds where vernonia’s fields that once weren’t flood plains now sop the cows so thick they drown where the sign says docs tavern above the crushed spine of a porch where monty’s tow and stow with real antiques and dust are sold where america decays”— Mimi German
Miriam’s Well
By Mimi German
PORTLAND Oregon—(Weekly Hubris)—February 2021—Since we last heard from Mimi German in November 2020, her manuscript, Hair of Horse Eyes, won honorable mention in The Hopper Poetry Prize 2020 competition. About her manuscript, poet Lisa Kwong said, “These poems are lyric, evocative constellations of images. These brief poems reverberate beyond what is on the page, giving readers much to think on and feel long after the final page. Stunning music is scattered throughout all of these poems.” German is now using buildings abandoned during the COVID-19 pandemic as canvases for her poems.
A Scenic View
By Mimi German
poverty lines these roads linton scappoose rainier st helens where the burned out burger barns edge out the sky where sunburnt r-vees deliquesce over dirt roads where the weight of empty pockets is gangrenous to desiccated thoughts and prayers and shadows of shackles obfuscate light where sheds barely resemble houses resembling sheds where vernonia’s fields that once weren’t flood plains now sop the cows so thick they drown where the sign says docs tavern above the crushed spine of a porch where monty’s tow and stow with real antiques and dust are sold where america decays ‘merica the beautiful where the buzz hum and flash of an electric billboard with broken lights tells you that jesus saves where guns are for all and all are for what exactly what is the it everyone’s all for where in the ‘merica of the mind lack of vision wins where blind is as blind sees where in the mobile home seep of this tumbleweed stew sterilized wonder grows in the petri dish where the hills are steep and crumbling and the elk aren’t crossing anymore where the scenic view looks out to the shuttered steel mill across the river where the sunrise is a silhouetted shadow like an ode to a dirge and the wind’s so strong it blows the seabirds sideways where cars drive into the ocean whose waves look like mud where all that’s left are dark waters and the crystal clear dream of a lollipop some politician doled out to the poor where someone smashed the snake and left it on the trail and the mule with no name has gone off to find another sunset where not even a rooster crows but two chickens converse on the side of the road where a truck with a flat rumbles by where the rain’s coming in from the west the eastern sky is zipping up where desperados stole what would they could and the rest of where is scattered to the salty winds no good for no one now where it’s cold and here comes the rain
6 Comments
Ben
The imagery evoked from this poem are dark, simper and powerful and at once I’m transported to seeing the scenes through your eyes.
Mimi
Thank you, Ben. While the ride is dark and daunting, thank you for daring to ride along with it in the poem.
Jean
I think you have just explained to me what it is to be a visual person.
The images are astonishing and hard and beautiful and sad, and I feel as if I just visited the Oracle at Delphi; satisfied, but needing time to ponder the prophecy.
Thank you.
Sheila Parks
Dear darling most loved Mimi, you poem is amazing and so are you. Soxoxxoxoxo
Mimi
Jean,
Thank you so much. To know that what I’ve written has resonated with you in such a way is humbling, to say the least. These are the dark times. If I could find joy to write about in a way that seemed honest and true, I would. But everywhere, there is this darkness. So, thank you, Jean. For reading my poem. For responding. For thinking and for pondering. Your comment is one I will not soon forget.
—Mimi
Mimi
Dearest Sheila,
Thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to comment! I think of you often and am wishing you health and as much happiness as is possible! Sending you enormous amounts of hugs from the other coast.
With love,
Mimi