Wondering
Waking Point
by Helen Noakes
“. . . is there a world in which/another me resides,/living a life quite different/from mine . . .” Helen Noakes
SAN FRANCISCO California—(Weekly Hubris)—5/7/2012—
“Wondering”
Quantum physicists have affirmed
what ancient sages knew,
that there are parallel worlds,
parallel universes.
If so, is there a world in which
another me resides,
living a life quite different
from mine,
embraced by husband,
children,
family?
Does she ever wonder
what it’s like to be
the me who’s writing
this
About her?
The me, who’s sitting,
in this quiet
early morning
reading Woolf and Oliver,
gazing at the not so distant
Pacific,
wondering what it’s like
to be her?
Photo: by Helen Noakes
7 Comments
paulaH
lovely. this backing and forthing. this sense of here and somewhere else and that time is not linear. love the photo too. ah. paris. — ph
Helen Noakes
Thanks so much, Paula, for reading and for taking the time to send this message. Hearing from readers means a lot to me.
Jon Sindell
It’s a lovely poem Helen. You are so attuned to your inner voice (or, given your theme, your inner voices!). I love your use of negative space, and the sweet quietude of the poem. One question: Mary Oliver? Kudos, Jon
Miles P.
Nice verse for a warm day. Very peaceful.
I think my parallel self makes more money.
Helen Noakes
Thanks for taking the time read and to comment, Jon. Mary Oliver is a wonderful poet. Her work explores the nuances of nature and its impact on our lives. The Mechanics’ has a collection of her work. Worth a read. Thanks, again.
Helen Noakes
Hi Miles,
Thanks for reading and for commenting. I’m not quite sure about my parallel self’s financial status, but it wouldn’t be too difficult for her to be better off than me in the money department. Always love your humor, Miles. Thanks, again.
Jon Sindell
Mary Oliver, cool. I actually have a book of hers on writing poetry; it’s pretty good. Looking forward to your next effort, Helen!